32 comments on “Innocence

  1. an excellent ‘rolling poem’, runs smoothly off the tongue so is both pleasant to read and read aloud. Mikesteedeen has it right with ‘classic Lenzi’. Considering your immense talent, Paul, perhaps we should coin a new phrase when writing a brilliant poem by suggesting we ‘pulled a Lenzi’. best wishes from baldy

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  2. Wow, you have really captured that first bush with the opposite sex, remember how incredibly exciting that was, all so new and fresh, yet to be tainted by heartbreak and disappointment… if only we could go back…. Thank you as always. Michelle

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