11 comments on “Riding the Arc

  1. While I am not a great fan of ‘rap music’ generally when it is one well I believe it to be a rather clever genre. Aside from the fact your words are not colloquial the meter of this staggeringly brilliant poem would I think make for the best rap song in its short history! Basically I’m saying for title to poem ‘sublime’

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