32 comments on “Quiddity

  1. believe in me
    as I am
    can be a bit better
    if not worse
    am not a curse
    just an idea to disburse
    think who are you
    and why?
    any clue.. if not
    think again

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  2. It is beautiful, but sometimes I am stunned that you like my poetry. We think so differently. I suppose that is why I like reading yours though! I would say if I were stripped to only my soul it would be comprised of color and relationships, and those bothersome opinions and beliefs would have vanished!

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  3. Lovely. This really speaks to me. I love how you used short lines to really convey what the narrator has been stripped of, leaving simplicity, except for the complexity of his thoughts (also reflected in the ingenuity of the poem itself).

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