16 comments on “Teredo

  1. The first line is in itself a poem within the poem, a theological portrait of what Calvin called ‘total depravity’ and of what the church as taught us of ‘original sin’ – the serpent at the heart of Eden – a negative image which you have turned to positive ends in this poem . . . You make me think too much!

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