35 comments on “Invention

  1. Oh my goodness–sheer genius, Beautiful and fun!! I had such a visual of everything including you getting sucked into the Great Machine.

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  3. Paul – this is awesome. Images, rhythm and in-line rhymes, whimsy, tone – everything going for it! Perfect goldbergesque schematic to accompany to boot. Thoroughly enjoyed it. —Chagall

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  5. Really nice! I am actually trying to write a horror short story for a prompt and the theme is mother Earth…this has truly inspired me- the best gift of all 🙂 thanks a lot!

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