
“Broken Mirror Effect” by Natasha Clegg
broken mirrors return random aspects of self
discrete pieces each bearing some something
some hint of the whole who stood present
and perfect of past before shattering under
intense vicious glare of an unstable future
Oh WOWZA, Paul–so eloquently said…
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thanks dearly, RL
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Most welcome always, Paul.
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This is beautifully done 🌹
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much appreciated
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That you make something broken a whole unto itself without using brush, canvas or paint a remarkable thing; a remarkable poetic skill.
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thanks kindly, mike
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I very much enjoyed your interesting perspective on the nature of broken mirrors.
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many thanks
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I enjoyed how you paired the sight of disjointed reflections with disjointed pissibilities.
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much appreciated, benji
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What a beautiful piece
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thanks kindly
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Love the fractured reality!
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any thanks
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Penetrating reflection of the uneasiness in today’s world.
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I appreciate your interpretation
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Applies to so much! Bravo, Paul!
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much appreciated, ellen
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Powerful depth to your words Paul, as is the depth the of mirror. We see life in so very many fragments, snapshots, glimpses.
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thanks kindly
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