28 comments on “Endings

  1. I should like to tell you how much I appreciate you through the inspiration of your blog and how Thankful I am that you touch my life. Happy Thanksgiving, Friend!


  2. Elegantly put. Lovely sound and feel to this. It made me think (as a 30-something) both in terms of the perspective learned by a stage-of-life I’ve yet to reach, but also our general tendency these days to try to rush through everything quickly – as if we can’t get to our demise fast enough!


  3. Your style is called “free style verse” and it is absolutely lovely. I believe poem structures should come from the heart and soul, but I hope many are all ‘open’. The free structures don’t have to be exactly planned nor do they keep to a strict rule. And… nor is there any (or much) rhyming.
    I like poems like that don’t rhyme too much unless its Valentines Day.


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