28 comments on “King for a Day

  1. Dir sir. I enjoyed your poem immensly. I am loathe to ever suggest a poet change their work. However, in a spirit of playfulness, I am curious if you would consider another version of this poem changing only one word. Consider changing the word “fog” to frog. It would work wonderfully and fit symbollically with the rest of the poem. Two versions. They both work. Peace.

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