10 comments on “Alienation

  1. AWESOME!!! the words, the ideas and heart in this poem. Such depth and truth for our lives today. Thank you for liking my poem – i feel so grateful and happy i could come and visit here! Your words are so powerful. Thank you! 🙂

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  2. very interesting. sometimes w my poetry i feel instinctively like breaking a line, but many times the lines don’t logically follow one another and instead are connected through vague associates, so i feel like your poem set a good example of how to keep things flowing from line to line

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