15 comments on “COPD

  1. I worked home visitation hospice for a couple years. Worst one… or one of the worst… was a COPD sufferer. Not great. Never a smoker. Just drew the wrong card. You brought it in this poem. Good writing. Very good!

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  2. Thank you Paul for giving us a snapshot of COPD and your experiencing it. As always, Dear Friend, you have penned such a beautiful poem. You have painted a masterpiece with your words that we can always treasure with your other memorable works of art, painted with your words! I really loved these lines – inescapable
    penance for
    nonchalant folly
    Thank you for sharing your gift, Paul – R.I.P!!!

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